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Liquid Happiness MAG

May 27, 2012
By Anny_Grace SILVER, Centennial, Colorado
Anny_Grace SILVER, Centennial, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 22 comments

The afternoon sun
warm and comforting
sliding over my skin
like a blanket
kissing my cheeks
nose
turning the tips of my hair
golden
transforming my blood
to liquid summer
Liquid happiness



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asofnow GOLD said...
on May. 26 2014 at 11:03 pm
asofnow GOLD, Troy, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing gold can stay ~ Robert Frost

I liked it. The repetition at the end was especially uplifitng.

on Sep. 21 2012 at 4:09 pm
CelebrateDifferences, Long Island, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Gods of Olympus.&rdquo; Piper stared at Leo. &ldquo;What happened to you?&rdquo;<br /> His hair was greased back. He had welding goggles on his forehead, a lipstick mark on his cheek, tattoos all over his arms, and a T-shirt that read HOT STUFF, BAD BOY, and TEAM LEO.<br /> &ldquo;Long story,&rdquo; he said.&rdquo;

Simply a magical read.

on Jun. 3 2012 at 1:05 pm
realbeautifulheart PLATINUM, Livermore, California
21 articles 1 photo 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is a package that you have to sign for. Yes, it&#039;s free. No, there&#039;s no guarantee as to what it holds. Open with caution, it&#039;s &#039;FRAGILE&#039;.&quot; (I made this up.)

I like the shortness. Interesting perspective. As I color, I see this poem as yellow. A golden, sun-flecked, sparkling, warm and shiny yellow :)

on Jun. 2 2012 at 6:29 pm
lenathetiger BRONZE, Columbia, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Many (people) were increasingly of the opinion that they&#039;d all made a big mistake in coming down from the trees in the first place. And some said that even the trees had been a bad move, and that no one should ever have left the oceans.&quot;

I see it like a movie. I really felt like my wrists were bleeding yellow :) that might sound strange..

on Jun. 2 2012 at 2:49 pm
Hibiscus SILVER, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
9 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;None of us can do great things. But we can do small things with great love.&quot; - Mother Teresa

Lovely poem with vived imagery! Great job! 

abbey92 GOLD said...
on May. 31 2012 at 11:44 pm
abbey92 GOLD, Fremont, Nebraska
10 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
she smiles like she&#039;s so tough<br /> she&#039;s just someones daughter waiting for some one to love her<br /> <br /> never leave the one you love for the one you like because the one you like will leave you for the one they love

short n sweet... 5 stars