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July 21, 2012
By dallasluv09 SILVER, Beatrice, Nebraska
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dallasluv09 SILVER, Beatrice, Nebraska
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don't mess with texas.

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You think its wrong.
You tell us make love not war.
Are simple reply shut up you stupid hippie.
It's part of your country and pride.
6 generations of people in my family.
revolution
civil
ww1
ww2
vietnam
Iraq war
One day you will join and know what we feel.
Your the one against the soldiers
not us.
Go ahead and protest.

© Kimber E., Yorktown, VA

The author's comments:
this is the story of my brother, dad,cousins,uncles,and gradfathers.
fighting to keep are country safe.
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Miss_Brightside GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2012 at 9:28 am
Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
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It&#039;s like she sees the diamond underneath And she&#039;s polishin&#039; you &#039;til you shine. -Brad Paisley. (this goes to my step mom she keeps me going)<br /> If you want a rainbow you gotta put up with the rain.-Albert Einstein

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i know that. and i agree ppl shouldnt treat our vets bad.
Honour SILVER said...
on Jul. 31 2012 at 6:34 pm
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
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Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. ~John 15:13<br /> <br /> &quot;Give me liberty or give me death!&quot; ~Patrick Henry<br /> <br /> Be brave and steadfast; have no fear or dread of them, for it is the Lord, your God, who marches with you; he will never fail you or forsake you. ~ Deuteronomy 31:6<br /> <br /> &quot;I prefer dangerous freedom over peaceful slavery&quot; ~ Thomas Jefferson

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I'm not saying the wars are good, they're not. What I'm saying is that if we are fighting a war to keep us safe here, we shouldn't bash our soldiers who fight to keep us safe.
Miss_Brightside GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2012 at 11:31 am
Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
It&#039;s like she sees the diamond underneath And she&#039;s polishin&#039; you &#039;til you shine. -Brad Paisley. (this goes to my step mom she keeps me going)<br /> If you want a rainbow you gotta put up with the rain.-Albert Einstein

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great poem. i Agree with proud but i also disagree. i do wish we could stop the wars. they just bring pain/
Honour SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2012 at 11:01 am
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
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Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. ~John 15:13<br /> <br /> &quot;Give me liberty or give me death!&quot; ~Patrick Henry<br /> <br /> Be brave and steadfast; have no fear or dread of them, for it is the Lord, your God, who marches with you; he will never fail you or forsake you. ~ Deuteronomy 31:6<br /> <br /> &quot;I prefer dangerous freedom over peaceful slavery&quot; ~ Thomas Jefferson

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Hoorah!!! Great job, Dallas!! Thank your family for me! :D  This is well written though it needs a bit of capitalzation work.   Like Veitnam, WWI, and WWII would be capitalizied, but other than that it's awesome!!

I agree with you,, if people want to protest the people who fight and die for them than they can, but it doesn't make it right.