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A little bit

July 24, 2012
By justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Everyone could use a little bit.

A little bit more money
A little bit less war
A little bit more time
A little bit less trouble

A little bit more faith
A little bit less tears
A little bit more happy
A little bit less sad

A little bit more calm
A little bit less angry
A little bit more freedom
A little bit less problems

A little bit more friendship
A little bit less loneliness
A little bit more living
A little bit less killing

A little bit more found
A little bit less loss
A little bit more of good
A little bit less bad

Everyone could use a little bit.

© Kristen T., Tulsa, OK

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SSSplatters PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 4 2013 at 8:02 pm
SSSplatters PLATINUM, Plainview, Minnesota
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"What does not kill you makes you stronger!" or
"Your only limits are the ones you set on yourself" Love doesn't bring happiness, happiness can just happens to be found easier where there is love-- Sam

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good all except a bit too repetitive use more contrast
Miss_Brightside GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2012 at 12:12 pm
Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
It's like she sees the diamond underneath And she's polishin' you 'til you shine. -Brad Paisley. (this goes to my step mom she keeps me going)
If you want a rainbow you gotta put up with the rain.-Albert Einstein

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i love it! its so true to...