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A Thin Glass Wall

November 24, 2012
By paige14 GOLD, Portsmouth, Ohio
paige14 GOLD, Portsmouth, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Say what you need to say--John Mayer

My trust in you
A thin glass wall
So frail
Easily broken
I am blind
To lies
In plain sight

Hairline fractures
But still
I deny
Try to fix
And repair
You pile more behind
Start to overflow
I see nothing
La La La
I hear nothing

It is shattered
I cannot ignore
A tidal wave
It crushes me
I am drowning
All I wanted to forget
I am suffocating
You never really cared

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on Dec. 4 2012 at 9:14 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

This is really dramatic. I love how the lines are really short and articulated. It really is a great poem. I think you should add more poetic elements into it, though. I think that would make your writing really pop. (: