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Guilty

December 21, 2012
By nightrunner23 PLATINUM, Greene, New York
nightrunner23 PLATINUM, Greene, New York
33 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you treat me like a princess, I'll treat you like a prince.
If you treat me like a game, I'll show you how it's played.


Why is it I take the blame?
It was not I who touched the flame.
It was not I who felt the burn,
it was not I who took the turn.
It was not my hand stole his life,
but it is I who was cut by the knife.
Justice, they say, has been served,
but justice here is undeserved.

Why is it I am taken away?
When I desperately want a reason to stay,
but someone’s debt I am forced to pay
because of blame that on on me they lay.



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on Jan. 9 2013 at 5:44 pm
nightrunner23 PLATINUM, Greene, New York
33 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you treat me like a princess, I'll treat you like a prince.
If you treat me like a game, I'll show you how it's played.

Yeah, whoops.  I'm embarrased, it was supposed to be that stole his life.  Sorry.

on Jan. 9 2013 at 3:57 pm
Unwritten31xo BRONZE, ...., Connecticut
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This is good, and well written. The only thought i had was at the line "It was not my hand stole his life.." Maybe write it as 'it was not my hand that stole his life' , or something of the sort. It just seems like a word should be placed there. But this is a good poem and is well written, especially with your inspiration just being a photo.

on Jan. 9 2013 at 9:30 am
nightrunner23 PLATINUM, Greene, New York
33 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you treat me like a princess, I'll treat you like a prince.
If you treat me like a game, I'll show you how it's played.

We had to do an writing piece of a picture in my english class.  The picture was of hands in habdcuffs, but the hands were flawless, like they'd never done anything.

on Jan. 8 2013 at 6:20 pm
idontusethisaccountxxx, Appleton, Wisconsin
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A very nice poem-- where'd u get inspiration