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Invisible girl

January 21, 2013
By iimoeloveii GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
iimoeloveii GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
14 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
IF YOU CAN'T HANG THEN THERE'S THE DOOR-SLEEPING WITH SIRENS


invisible girl
that's me
no one can see me
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
no one can hear me
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
the ghost of darkness
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
proud of it
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
imbrasing it
invisible
is me



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Sonder said...
on Apr. 7 2014 at 1:59 pm
Sonder, Wattpad, Other
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I feel as though you didn't need to repeat the words so many times, but other than that Nicely penned. =)

Hamza Waseem said...
on Mar. 31 2013 at 4:43 am
I felt the words re too repetitive, but the theme is good. so yeah. nice work!

on Mar. 31 2013 at 4:03 am
larissaecm SILVER, Victoria, Other
7 articles 0 photos 44 comments
this one is probably one of my favourites, I really love it, it sorta describes me<3 added to favs

EMarie GOLD said...
on Mar. 31 2013 at 3:49 am
EMarie GOLD, Joplin, Missouri
19 articles 7 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Courage comes in all sizes, but fits only a few.
What is wise is not always right and what is right is not always wise.
Knowing what is wrong and right is not choosing which to fight.
-All of these are by me

I like this, but the flow seemed a little confusing. Maybe if you added a line between the stanzas it would help. But I like the content of your poem!