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Invisible girl

January 21, 2013
By iimoeloveii GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
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iimoeloveii GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
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IF YOU CAN'T HANG THEN THERE'S THE DOOR-SLEEPING WITH SIRENS

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invisible girl
that's me
no one can see me
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
no one can hear me
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
the ghost of darkness
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
proud of it
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
imbrasing it
invisible
is me

© James S., Philadelphia, PA

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Sonder said...
on Apr. 7 2014 at 1:59 pm
Sonder, Wattpad, Other
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I feel as though you didn't need to repeat the words so many times, but other than that Nicely penned. =)
Hamza Waseem said...
on Mar. 31 2013 at 4:43 am
I felt the words re too repetitive, but the theme is good. so yeah. nice work!
larissaecm SILVER said...
on Mar. 31 2013 at 4:03 am
larissaecm SILVER, Victoria, Other
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this one is probably one of my favourites, I really love it, it sorta describes me<3 added to favs
EMarie GOLD said...
on Mar. 31 2013 at 3:49 am
EMarie GOLD, Joplin, Missouri
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I like this, but the flow seemed a little confusing. Maybe if you added a line between the stanzas it would help. But I like the content of your poem!