Abandoned | Teen Ink


January 23, 2013
By JNG612 SILVER, Basking Ridge, New Jersey
JNG612 SILVER, Basking Ridge, New Jersey
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You left me.

No matter how many times
I say that I need you,
You still left me.

So here I lie,
Curled up in a
Ball on my bed.

Grasping for comfort
When there is
To be

You claim to be my
Friend, yet you refuse
To give me what I need.

Isolated and
Alone. What reason do I have
To not give up?

When did we become
The people that we only
Turn to in times of trouble?

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on Feb. 1 2013 at 5:18 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

I loved this too, and I can really relate.

on Feb. 1 2013 at 11:05 am
colorguardgrl ELITE, Derry, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
“If I had a world of my own, everything would be nonsense. Nothing would be what it is, because everything would be what it isn't. And contrary wise, what is, it wouldn't be. And what it wouldn't be, it would. You see?” - Mad Hatter

i like the last stanza it really makes the poem great job :D