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I Remember

March 2, 2013
By nightrunner23 PLATINUM, Greene, New York
nightrunner23 PLATINUM, Greene, New York
33 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you treat me like a princess, I'll treat you like a prince.
If you treat me like a game, I'll show you how it's played.


I remember
The love we once shared
As we laid in the grass
Our souls freshly bared.
I remember
How you promised me
That I was your lock
And you were my key.
I remember
How we kissed under the moon
And how everything ended
Much too soon.
I remember
The lights in the windshield
And your panicked eyes
The nights our fates were sealed.
I remember
The long fight
You suffered through
That tragic night.
I remember
How we used to be.
Before you lost yourself
To save me.
I remember
The look in your eye.
As you whispered
Your final goodbye.
I remember
Every day I do
I wish I could forget
That night with you.



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on Mar. 31 2013 at 12:07 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
27 articles 0 photos 423 comments

Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

Hi! This is so, so good. Omg. The amount of emotion in here is too much for me to handle. This is amazing! It flows so nicely and it is written so well. This is impeccable. Keep writing, you're great!

on Mar. 29 2013 at 11:00 pm
Ashes3lol SILVER, Columbus, Montana
6 articles 5 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return.

This is so sad... I can feel your emotion, annd it made me cry :.(

on Mar. 29 2013 at 10:18 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 433 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

I'm crying my face off with all your emotions in this poem gosh your amazing, if anyone says this peoms bad im seriously gonna think they did not read it i love your emotions, flow, and rythm

on Mar. 29 2013 at 6:26 pm
Happymask PLATINUM, Pride, Louisiana
22 articles 3 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have great faith in fools, self-confidence my friends call it." - Edgar Allan Poe

That's awful! How could you write somethiing that emotional with such conviction? I'll never forgive you for it... (It's a great poem)

on Mar. 19 2013 at 8:03 pm
Choirgirl SILVER, Las Cruces, New Mexico
7 articles 0 photos 22 comments
This is really good.  I can relate to it also.  Continue the great work.

jaylen554 said...
on Mar. 19 2013 at 5:00 pm
jaylen554, Boston, Massachusetts
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you'll always a job that you won't pass!"

I really like your poem, you are a great athour.  It's also really emotional

on Mar. 19 2013 at 1:43 pm
larissaecm SILVER, Victoria, Other
7 articles 0 photos 44 comments
the very first words got to be, i was literally tearing up by the end of this. 10/10 keep it up!