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March 22, 2013
By ZoieRose GOLD, Olympia, Washington
ZoieRose GOLD, Olympia, Washington
11 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
People don't always put up walls to keep other people out, sometimes they put up walls to see who's strong enough to break them down

Can you feel the sunshine?
Does it brighten up your day?
Don't you feel the need sometimes,
Just to run away.
Run from all your sorrows,
Run from all your dreams.
Take the time to figure out,
Exactly what life means.

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on Apr. 18 2013 at 12:25 am
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
22 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go...”
― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You'll Go!

I like this one, and there are many places where you could go with it. If you felt like it, this could be a reoccurring theme in a much larger poem where you give your idea of the meaning of the world or the act of searching for it in poetic form and have these stanzas pop up a lot. It's a good poem, and separating the two halves could give it a bit mroe clarity.

mjune BRONZE said...
on Apr. 18 2013 at 12:21 am
mjune BRONZE, Midland Park, New Jersey
4 articles 0 photos 9 comments
i love this poem! so good!

on Apr. 13 2013 at 5:32 pm
Nagini95 BRONZE, Lahore, Other
3 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
''If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way''
(Will Rogers)

This is beautiful!