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Before You Leave

March 28, 2013
By romanticpoet GOLD, Dhaka, Other
romanticpoet GOLD, Dhaka, Other
16 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
love is like a rose, it has many colors & sights of beauty in spite of having thorns


Before saying good-bye,





Please say you love me
I know I won’t see you ever, yet I love you without end





I cant face the reality




I am building my sympathy




Because I cant see you never




My love for you was forever



But why we cant be each others


I don’t know, possibly you don’t love me



Possibly I don’t belong with you


That’s why you didn’t sleep with me
I love you but I want more to say


So before leaving the door,
Please say you love like I do
I know I would be fake, if you say

It will be so easy to give,
My heart before you leave
So, now you know how deeper I love you
Good-bye my heart given love
I wont be seeing you with my heart full of love


The author's comments:
it's happening to many teenagers, a boy falls in love with a girl but the girl doesn't accept

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on May. 19 2013 at 12:23 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

but sometimes its the other way around...... trust me i know.....

on May. 19 2013 at 12:22 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

like i said b4 .... i love it....!!!

on May. 5 2013 at 11:17 am
Brittany-NamedTheFluffMastahNumber2 GOLD, Milford, Connecticut
15 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
The person that you'd take a bullet for is behind the trigger.
(song)
Miss Missing You - Fall Out Boy (:

BEAUTIFUL... very nice

on Apr. 19 2013 at 1:36 am
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
22 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go...”
― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You'll Go!

This one was alright. It conveys a very real emotion and pretty well, but I think you could do more with it. There is more to love than just sleeping together, so show her you wanted her to give you her heart still even though she is rejecting you.

Hamza Waseem said...
on Apr. 9 2013 at 3:41 am
nice work. 4.5/5

Haden_Stein said...
on Apr. 8 2013 at 2:02 am
Haden_Stein, Goshen, Indiana
0 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
stopping the violence in the most tactical and intelligent way possible... MORE VIOLENCE!!!!

pretty... im not really much for poetry, but this is a little interesting.

Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Apr. 7 2013 at 11:12 am
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 631 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

Beautiful! Its amazing yet sad.... great!

on Apr. 2 2013 at 11:35 am
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

i love it ....!!!  

on Apr. 2 2013 at 11:34 am
ChildOfTheArrow BRONZE, San Pedro, California
3 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Scars remind us where we've been. They don't have to dictate where we're going" David Rossi (criminal minds)

aww this is bitter sweet i like it