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Goodbye, to late though

April 13, 2013
By Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 433 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

I'm sorry I never got to say but,
I miss your laugh, I miss your smile,
I miss how your spirit and soul comfoted the storm,
That I was going through,
You were filled with no judgement on my behalf,
You were my stone that kept me from drowning,
You are my life persever I clutch comfoting,
Embracing the good I know I can be with you by my side,
I remember the nights where the terrors of the world over came me,
And your smile brighten my life, As you protect me,
Keeping the monsters at bay, You hear what I say,
The sound of your voice sent chils down my spine,
But now the hallways are silent of that velvet voice,
The nigths that are lonley without you by my side sends a tear down my hand as I try to wipe away the tears,
And your eyes transfixed, as I long to see them glowing and grinning with pleasure of loving you forever and always,
So thank you my friend for being by my side even if you had to leave without me, without a good-bye,
Thank you for your life and binding yours to mine,
I miss you and will always wait to meet you again so goodbye dear friend all see you soon enough.

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This article has 7 comments.

on Feb. 11 2014 at 8:26 pm
KkatKreationz PLATINUM, Minerva, Ohio
31 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken." :)

Creative and Beautiful. Goodjob :)

Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Jul. 26 2013 at 11:09 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 631 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

Aw this is very emotional; it expresses the turmoil one goes through when seperating. Jeez, metaphors come soo easy to you dont they? they run effortless in your poems and are almost hypnotic. My favorite line is, "Keeping the monsters at bay." Wonderful; ur such an AMAZING WRITER! lol

on Jul. 25 2013 at 10:22 pm
maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
14 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
let me not to the marriage of true minds admit impediments...etc

so good.

Monicaa GOLD said...
on Apr. 26 2013 at 3:19 pm
Monicaa GOLD, North Las Vegas, Nevada
11 articles 0 photos 27 comments
Love It :) Its Sad but Deep :) <3

on Apr. 19 2013 at 4:47 pm
MeggieMills SILVER, Baltimore, Maryland
9 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
I therefor I am a Writer.

So ... sad - but creative! KEEP ON GOING!!!

on Apr. 18 2013 at 6:53 am
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

This was really cool! Very emotional and heartfelt. I like ur style, and u snuck a few rhymes in there, which I liked. 5 stars !! ;)

GreyGirl ELITE said...
on Apr. 18 2013 at 6:47 am
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 391 comments
This is good. It captures your emotions very well. Good imagery! I’m not usually a fan of free verse, but I like this poem! Keep it up! You’re a good writer!!!!!!!! *****