Hey there! I don't read your work as often as I should, I didn't in the past anyways, but now I check every so often for new work and today was my lucky day when I found this. I loved the title, though you'd like a new one. And maybe I enjoy it because recently I have been writing lullabies for a friend of mine whom I am writing a novel with. But, after reading this I see why you'd like a new title. I like the picture, it seems to go very well with the poem. The grumpiness of the picture and the grumpiness of the person you speak of in the poem. I really enjoyed this. I loved the set-up, it was much different from most poems I have read. And I love the way you rhyme in this poem, it's also different from most poems. I like the simplicity of the poem, but the deeper meaning it builds up to. You really did a great job and I hope that more people will find this and really enjoy reading it the way I did. Great job! And it's okay if you don't have time, but I have a new poem up called 'The Dance of the Souls' and I would love to hear your thoughts on it. (: