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Still Blue
July 30, 2013
The translucent ocean
matches the blue of your eyes
I remember a time
where life passed us by
A time so far away, now
I can't remember the feel of your touch,
or how
I remembered the still blue of your eyes
They captivated my very being
your still blue eyes
Even without me seeing
you for so long
Even now the tingle of
flesh on flesh
Still brings on hot flashes
of cold regrets
Your still blue eyes
are nomore
for they don't
captivate me anymore
© Tori W., Victoria, BC, Canada
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Beaniebaby123 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2013 at 6:13 pm
Thanks for the feedback
hatefulgirl said...
on Jul. 31 2013 at 1:59 am
the thought of it is very nice ...
Lovessunlight PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2013 at 12:25 am
make sure to double check your work It's great otherwise and you can use punctuation in poetry if you want, some might help it read more smoothly
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"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks