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A Childhood of Thinking

July 31, 2013
By LiaBe PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
LiaBe PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
44 articles 3 photos 18 comments

I had everything.
The sky and the sun.
A sense that the world had just begun.
That there is something to be won.

I had everything.
My mother’s kisses
And eyes full of wanting.
A pocket bursting with bills,
And a world to buy.

Then I had nothing
But a cheek stained with pink,
And empty eyes—
My watery dreams
Dried by a flaming star,
Too faraway to reach.

But now I have something
Memories made of what was,
A sky full of what is,
And eyes that see what can be.



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on Aug. 3 2013 at 10:53 am
RelativetoWriting GOLD, Brecksville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Do I contradict myself? Very well, then I contradict myself, I am large, I contain multitudes.&quot; <br /> -Walt Whitman

I love the sense of progression in this poem and the smooth transitions from one stanza to the next. Spectacular work!