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The Noises of the Night - Twisted Version

September 3, 2013
By hrj_nikki14 SILVER, Apex, North Carolina
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hrj_nikki14 SILVER, Apex, North Carolina
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When life gives you lemons, make orange juice, and keep the world to wonder how you did it.

Women are like angels. You break our wings... we simply continue to fly... on broomsticks. We're flexible like that (;

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I put my hands up to my ears,
And shut my eyes.
I think of happy things,
While silently I cry.

Behind my lids I see,
Behind my hands I hear.
Inside my heart I feel,
All the noises pressing near.

Their words, they dance around me,
A soft sound on the wind.
The seeds of doubt have been embedded,
And are tearing at my skin.

I fight it back for long,
But not every battle can be won.
Soon I just lay down.
I give up. I am done.

The sadness fights its way,
Up to my very soul.
Until I become an empty shell,
Emotionless and dull.

I have my battle scars,
And I have my battle wounds.
Sometimes I'd like to think,
That it will be over soon.

With every noise that's said,
A piece of me will die.
I'll lie down in surrender,
And slowly close my eyes.

© Jami U., W. Hempstead, NY

The author's comments:
What really inspired this piece was mostly things I have heard about online and in daily life. About bullying, giving up, depression, cutting, suicide, things like that. All of this is so common now.
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hrj_nikki14 SILVER said...
on Sep. 13 2013 at 10:59 pm
hrj_nikki14 SILVER, Apex, North Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make orange juice, and keep the world to wonder how you did it.

Women are like angels. You break our wings... we simply continue to fly... on broomsticks. We're flexible like that (;

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Thank you. It was supposed to be a sad ending. Sad endings are the most powerful. Happy endings are to... predicted.
Mckay ELITE said...
on Sep. 13 2013 at 6:28 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

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I love that ending. Everything seems perfect. Until that sad ending. Powerful. 
hrj_nikki14 SILVER said...
on Sep. 13 2013 at 5:55 pm
hrj_nikki14 SILVER, Apex, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make orange juice, and keep the world to wonder how you did it.

Women are like angels. You break our wings... we simply continue to fly... on broomsticks. We're flexible like that (;

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Thanks Roses!!
DarknessHasFallen GOLD said...
on Sep. 13 2013 at 5:41 pm
DarknessHasFallen GOLD, Broomfield, Colorado
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i love it!!!! nikki you are great
hrj_nikki14 SILVER said...
on Sep. 13 2013 at 4:58 pm
hrj_nikki14 SILVER, Apex, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make orange juice, and keep the world to wonder how you did it.

Women are like angels. You break our wings... we simply continue to fly... on broomsticks. We're flexible like that (;

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That means so much to me! Thank you a lot Blotted!! <33333
ChasingForever said...
on Sep. 13 2013 at 3:53 pm
ChasingForever, Morris, Pennsylvania
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"Yesterday influences today, thus creates tomorrow."- Ellen Hopkins
"Shoot for the moon, because even if you miss, you'll land among the stars."-Les Brown

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By far my favorite!
ChasingForever said...
on Sep. 13 2013 at 3:28 pm
ChasingForever, Morris, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Yesterday influences today, thus creates tomorrow."- Ellen Hopkins
"Shoot for the moon, because even if you miss, you'll land among the stars."-Les Brown

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This is really good! Keep writing!
hrj_nikki14 SILVER said...
on Sep. 12 2013 at 4:52 pm
hrj_nikki14 SILVER, Apex, North Carolina
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When life gives you lemons, make orange juice, and keep the world to wonder how you did it.

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Thank you so much!! That means a lot to me liv(: This was the first poem I wrote in years, and thats what started me writing. It is still my fav that I have done! 
BlottedInk said...
on Sep. 12 2013 at 4:45 pm
BlottedInk, Searsmont, Maine
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OMG!! THIS IS THE BEST POEM I HAVE EVER READ!!! wow :) I love this poem it has feeling....and ....and...omg. its really great and keep writing so i can keep reading :)
hrj_nikki14 SILVER said...
on Sep. 12 2013 at 3:21 pm
hrj_nikki14 SILVER, Apex, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make orange juice, and keep the world to wonder how you did it.

Women are like angels. You break our wings... we simply continue to fly... on broomsticks. We're flexible like that (;

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Thank you Kes(:
Kestrel PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 11 2013 at 8:48 pm
Kestrel PLATINUM, Warrenton, Virginia
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-There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy. (Shakespeare, Hamlet)

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it says the twisted version. do you have another version then?
Kestrel PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 11 2013 at 8:45 pm
Kestrel PLATINUM, Warrenton, Virginia
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-There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy. (Shakespeare, Hamlet)

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...and....any chance you'd read my latest poem?  TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/574253/The-Problem-with-Problems/ thank yew!
Kestrel PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 11 2013 at 8:43 pm
Kestrel PLATINUM, Warrenton, Virginia
29 articles 11 photos 189 comments

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-There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy. (Shakespeare, Hamlet)

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That's fine. I still like it. :) keep on writing. 
hrj_nikki14 SILVER said...
on Sep. 10 2013 at 8:12 pm
hrj_nikki14 SILVER, Apex, North Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make orange juice, and keep the world to wonder how you did it.

Women are like angels. You break our wings... we simply continue to fly... on broomsticks. We're flexible like that (;

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The reply above was for you :3 ^
hrj_nikki14 SILVER said...
on Sep. 10 2013 at 8:10 pm
hrj_nikki14 SILVER, Apex, North Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make orange juice, and keep the world to wonder how you did it.

Women are like angels. You break our wings... we simply continue to fly... on broomsticks. We're flexible like that (;

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It is supposed to be vague, so that a wide array of people can relate to it. And thank you(: This was the first piece I wrote in years xD So I guess it is a little rough.
Kestrel PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 10 2013 at 6:25 pm
Kestrel PLATINUM, Warrenton, Virginia
29 articles 11 photos 189 comments

Favorite Quote:
-There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy. (Shakespeare, Hamlet)

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I love the second verse. The whole thing is very deep, but without your description about the piece, it's  little vague and ambiguous. (This can be a good thing though; it's up to you if you want it to be open-ended and it does work here.)