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Distance MAG

October 1, 2008
By LindseyLemon SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
LindseyLemon SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
7 articles 1 photo 9 comments

I feel like we are falling apart.
Somewhere deep inside of me, I know it’s true.
I don’t want to believe it –
I don’t want to believe we have drifted
because of the distance.
The way I speak to you and the way you speak to me
Our voices are clouded and clogged
With fake laughs and fake sympathy.
You ask me how my family is doing.
I say we’re getting through the hard times.
I ask you how’s school.
You say it’s better.
I feel a catch in my throat when you say you’re
busy for the next couple of weeks.
That’s too bad; I was hoping we could hang out.
You talk about your new friend like she is gold.
I have no one to talk about.
I feel anger and pain and I regret never answering
your calls and texts.
If only you could understand the way I was feeling,
But communication was lacking.
“I have to go, I’ll call you back …”
And something tells me you won’t.



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on Apr. 8 2010 at 12:17 pm
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM, Nanuet, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"To me, Fearless is not the absense of fear. It's not being completely unafraid. To me, Fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, Fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death."
— Taylor Swift

This is an amazzzzing poem. Congrats on getting in the magazine. With work like this, I can tell you deserved it.

Great poem....maybe you could check out my stuff? Please?


on Apr. 8 2010 at 10:45 am
Isawyouyesterday GOLD, Cincinnati, Ohio
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I feel that this poem was hard for you to write but allows yourself to realize your true feelings. This poem is very relatable and yet painful to come across but helpful to others nonetheless

on Apr. 8 2010 at 10:43 am
Kelsey.Mae SILVER, Columbus, Montana
9 articles 0 photos 4 comments
Wow, that really related to me because of how i had felt when I was dating a boy for a year and a half. It seemed we were getting farther apart because he was losing interest in me i guess. I had found nothing wrong but he had to not be nice about everything and leave me

Metree SILVER said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 9:19 am
Metree SILVER, Machipongo, Virginia
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I really really love this one because this exact thing happened to me :( this poem makes me sad but it's very good

on Mar. 25 2010 at 6:37 am
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Once something has been said, it cannot be said in other words." -Aristotle

Awwww....This makes my eyes tear up! How dare you! ;) Good job.

Jtine BRONZE said...
on Mar. 17 2010 at 8:01 pm
Jtine BRONZE, Kalispell, Montana
4 articles 2 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
" This is your life, and it is your choice of how you make it."

ok, so this is so cool, and it explains a lot. Really enjoy it!

xoxo: hrsegrl

Rams said...
on Mar. 17 2010 at 4:08 pm
I like it. // It has a flow, and the flow is smooth. Yeah, I really like it. (:

Keasbey GOLD said...
on Mar. 17 2010 at 3:39 pm
Keasbey GOLD, La Habra Heights, California
12 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I will no longer pray on my knees, to a god who's left me so many times. I will no longer pray on my knees, to a god who won't answer my call."

amazing, really is. totally relateable too.

on Mar. 17 2010 at 11:20 am
like OMG OMG OMG OH EM GEEEEEEEEEEEE. THIS IS SO GOOOOOOOD. I DONT KNOW WHAT TO D I LVOE HTHIS SO MUCH OMG OMG OMG I LOVED IT PLEASE MARRY E I LOVED ITITITTITITTIT

on Mar. 17 2010 at 9:41 am
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
75 articles 11 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am who I am, sorry, no changes."

Its so relatable and sad.

But its beautiful in its own way.

Good job.

on Mar. 15 2010 at 2:44 pm
Keisha9797 BRONZE, Columbus, Ohio
1 article 2 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love One Another ; as you love yourself"
"Love Your Neighbor As You Love Yourself; Love Yourself Before You Can Love Anyone Else"

I Can 100% relate to this amazing poem i love it<3

Lulu said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 8:59 pm
I'm going through the same type of situation right now and reading this made me feel a little bit better, thank you

on Feb. 23 2010 at 6:30 pm
Acalleq PLATINUM, Togiak, Alaska
22 articles 5 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
you never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have

that's exactly how it is with my best friend/sister. you expressed the longing beautifully. good work

Kaayylaa GOLD said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 6:19 pm
Kaayylaa GOLD, Raleigh, North Carolina
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I liked it, easy to relate too. My only advice would be try and make it flow easier. other than that it was amazing!

on Feb. 23 2010 at 5:50 pm
nicdal85 SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be kind to everyone you meet, because you never know what people are going through"
-im not sure, i'll find out=)

the same is true for me,

this is amazing

on Feb. 23 2010 at 3:03 pm
Mickie... SILVER, Hamilton, Other
8 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your Shin: A device for finding furniture in the dark." "
If you tell a man the universe has two billion stars, he'll believe you, but tell him that that bench has wet paint and he'll have to touch it to make sure."

Thankyou. I am greatful that you wrote this poem, because it made me feel as though I am not alone in the pain I am feeling right now. I moved across the country, leaving my best friend behind. We promised things would stay the same, but latley, they are just not. Again, thanks.

on Feb. 23 2010 at 1:48 pm
muddygirl117389 SILVER, Smithvillq, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
All you need is love By: The Beatles

I loved it so much something like this happend but me and her stopped being friends because she started to abuse drugs and I just couldnt deal with that, I tried to get her to quite but now she just hangs out with others like her so its semi the same as ur poem I LOVED IT ^-^

on Feb. 23 2010 at 11:15 am
FlamingTaco1479 SILVER, Spring Mills, Pennsylvania
8 articles 8 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When life gives you lemons, hold onto them. They're free lemons!"

I loved how realistic this was, and the ending seemed really final and grabbing. Great work!

britt47 said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 6:48 am
it seems everyone can relate to this poem at some point in their life. This poem is amazing keep writing you are a natural for this kind of thing. i loved it.

on Feb. 16 2010 at 9:02 pm
Keisha9797 BRONZE, Columbus, Ohio
1 article 2 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love One Another ; as you love yourself"
"Love Your Neighbor As You Love Yourself; Love Yourself Before You Can Love Anyone Else"

My Relationship actally right now is totally relating to this poem i love this poem:)

Keep Writing:) Your Awesome!!<3