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Angel Kisses MAG

November 27, 2013
By Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

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They float down from heaven
And cover the ground.
To remind us they love us,
Yet they can't stick around.
They are soft as a feather
And white as bliss.
These little snowflakes
Are an angel's kiss.

© Thomas S., Portville, NY

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I got done working and stepped outside, only to see the ground dusted with tiny snowflakes...This poem immediately came to my mind as I admired the beauty!
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Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 27 2015 at 12:49 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Very good job on rhyming here, and a lovely general feel. You certainly deserved getting into the magazine.
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 19 2015 at 12:40 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

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Thank you so much!:)
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 18 2015 at 10:02 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
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God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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Wow, beautiful, precise and straightforward. Great rhymimg, too. Congratulations :)
Redolvene GOLD said...
on Dec. 23 2014 at 10:49 am
Redolvene GOLD, Sunny, Florida
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I love how you compared snowflakes to angel kisses. I never thought of them in that way. Super creative idea! Awesome poem 5/5
TrishDestiny PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 2 2014 at 9:57 am
TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
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&ldquo;When it&#039;s over, I want to say: all my life<br /> I was a bride married to amazement.<br /> I was the bridegroom, taking the world into my arms. <br /> <br /> When it is over, I don&#039;t want to wonder<br /> if I have made of my life something particular, and real.<br /> I don&#039;t want to find myself sighing and frightened,<br /> or full of argument. <br /> <br /> I don&#039;t want to end up simply having visited this world.&rdquo;

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Most great writers I known have capability to pack up all those feelings and thoughts in a few words. Combo plus for the rhyming, you did it so effortlessly. Tbh, rhyming isn't my thing. But you captured all of those in merely 8 lines.
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 27 2014 at 11:03 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart.&quot;

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thanks Sam! i cant wait to read some of your work!
MariahLina15 SILVER said...
on Mar. 27 2014 at 6:25 pm
MariahLina15 SILVER, Ventnor City, New Jersey
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&quot;Maybe it&#039;s not about the happy ending, maybe it&#039;s about the story.&quot; -A

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Any time! Loved your writing:)
Sam_likes_unicorns BRONZE said...
on Mar. 27 2014 at 5:18 pm
Sam_likes_unicorns BRONZE, Tarzana, California
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Resting my feet on the game of life.

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This is really good! Woah. 
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 27 2014 at 10:55 am
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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&quot;Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart.&quot;

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Aw thanks for the beautiful comment! That means a lot! Thank you again!
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 27 2014 at 10:54 am
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart.&quot;

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Thanks for taking the time to read and comment! Thanks a lot!:)
MariahLina15 SILVER said...
on Mar. 26 2014 at 4:47 pm
MariahLina15 SILVER, Ventnor City, New Jersey
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&quot;Maybe it&#039;s not about the happy ending, maybe it&#039;s about the story.&quot; -A

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Perfect :)
thatunknownthing DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 26 2014 at 9:39 am
thatunknownthing DIAMOND, Dubai, Other
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&quot;Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift; that&#039;s why they call it the present&quot;

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you've done a fantastic work with so much rhythm and sense! this truely deserves publishing! congratulations :)
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 21 2014 at 9:13 am
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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&quot;Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart.&quot;

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Thanks a ton!:)
ImmortalRose GOLD said...
on Mar. 20 2014 at 8:01 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

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I love this!!!
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 20 2014 at 3:39 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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&quot;Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart.&quot;

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Thanks Compassion! Ill always enjoy this comment!
compassion GOLD said...
on Mar. 19 2014 at 10:43 am
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
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Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

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WOW! Its amazing how you turned this into something meaningful and beautiful. Rhyming is very well maintained!
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 10 2014 at 4:53 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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&quot;Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart.&quot;

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A w thanks Ellie! You got published too!
411Ellie PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 9 2014 at 10:00 pm
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
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&quot;Paper is more patient than people.&quot; &ndash;Anne Frank

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Congratulations! I knew you would get published! <3
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 5 2014 at 3:21 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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&quot;Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart.&quot;

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Thank you Harri!:) 
Harri SILVER said...
on Feb. 27 2014 at 9:14 pm
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
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This is so sweet! I love how well you captured this! I love its simplicity!