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A Cannibal In Love MAG

November 16, 2008
By ZiXiang Zhang SILVER, Ridgewood, New York
ZiXiang Zhang SILVER, Ridgewood, New York
5 articles 0 photos 9 comments

I want to make a feast out of you
your fat swollen chops would be great
nourishment for my lovesick mind
your savory lips pack the flaky crunch
that goes
perfectly with crimson molasses like my
dear honey bear draining the life out of its belly
oh yes! the belly!
my tongue yearns for medium rare sausages …
your tubular will do perfectly
fillets off your midsection
still fresh and perfect for sushi
won’t you say?
I can’t wait to get a bite out of you and
won’t you want a piece of me too?

The author's comments:
Ehh...I've gotten various reviews on this one and they have been quite diverse in opinions, haha...Enjoy!

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XZSilverZX said...
on Apr. 17 2009 at 9:13 pm

i dont know to laugh or feel happy for you...

on Apr. 15 2009 at 12:26 pm
kidnapINcolor GOLD, Annapolis, Maryland
13 articles 3 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"'Cautse I'm awesome, no you're not dude don't like!"

Mucho interesting. I love the way you write. This is simple yet complex.

on Apr. 9 2009 at 10:14 pm
Babybluelove1 SILVER, Clyde, Texas
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FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!THATS ALL I CAN SAY!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Apr. 6 2009 at 8:44 pm
shivali8992 BRONZE, New Hyde Park, New York
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lol omg hi, we got to the same schoool =]

we were in the same ap world class last year.

i never knew you could write like this.

this is such an interesting outlook on love. i love it.

nice job =]

on Mar. 30 2009 at 11:45 pm
ZiXiang Zhang SILVER, Ridgewood, New York
5 articles 0 photos 9 comments
hey guys, thanks for the comments!!! I try ;DDD

on Mar. 30 2009 at 8:06 pm
YeseniaG SILVER, Livonia, Michigan
7 articles 1 photo 122 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is what happens when you're busy making plans.

i like all of it except the sushi part, just cuz people aren't fish but minor technicality.

on Mar. 30 2009 at 2:42 pm
CrowOfRuination PLATINUM, Lawrence, Kansas
38 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
You cannot be lonely if you like the person you're alone with. -Wayne Dyer
Leading those who have followed a greater leader without knowing what it is you are doing is the same as wielding a sword against a master of weapons. -Kreepy

I enjoyed reading this. It made me smile, which is hard to do for most people. I hope to read more from you, it was really great and i like it.

H.Caebre said...
on Nov. 20 2008 at 7:22 pm
that is SUCH a great poem! I's one of the best i've read on this site.

on Nov. 20 2008 at 1:20 pm
I LOVE THIS! haha this is pretty funny! I never knew a cannibal could be in love, let alone with his//her food! Genius!

Seeya Hun!


kimalima said...
on Nov. 20 2008 at 12:49 pm
That was sorta gross, but funny. keep up the good work.