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A Cannibal In Love MAG

November 16, 2008
By ZiXiang Zhang SILVER, Ridgewood, New York
ZiXiang Zhang SILVER, Ridgewood, New York
5 articles 0 photos 9 comments

I want to make a feast out of you
your fat swollen chops would be great
nourishment for my lovesick mind
your savory lips pack the flaky crunch
that goes
perfectly with crimson molasses like my
dear honey bear draining the life out of its belly
oh yes! the belly!
my tongue yearns for medium rare sausages …
your tubular will do perfectly
fillets off your midsection
still fresh and perfect for sushi
won’t you say?
I can’t wait to get a bite out of you and
won’t you want a piece of me too?

The author's comments:
Ehh...I've gotten various reviews on this one and they have been quite diverse in opinions, haha...Enjoy!

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on Jan. 12 2010 at 11:36 am
silent-one BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
things arent always as they seem.

i like this poem. its sick but to me it shows yearning in a whole other way. reminded me of like a vampire story

on Dec. 29 2009 at 10:16 pm
Only,I PLATINUM, Taylorville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
This too shall pass.

This is (to me) awkwardly sexy, I dunno what it is. But all in all I love it. It's very different and unique.

on Nov. 7 2009 at 10:14 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

It's vry unique but vry good lol

on Nov. 7 2009 at 12:45 am
lindseymarie SILVER, Richfield, Minnesota
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Demented, and Loverly.

Tis truly the only way to go.

One of my favorites.

Carol BRONZE said...
on Oct. 13 2009 at 8:54 pm
Carol BRONZE, Weslaco, Texas
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Interesting. Different but really good.

on Aug. 23 2009 at 3:30 pm
Writerzhand GOLD, Ball Ground, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
I wanna carry a piece of who I was before so when I hit the wall, I REALLY hit the wall.

This is different... but goo in its own little way.

Matthew BRONZE said...
on May. 30 2009 at 5:02 pm
Matthew BRONZE, Dublin, Ohio
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Ever try saying this to your crush? lol. It's good, though. Different than other things I've read, but very good.

on May. 25 2009 at 5:51 am
ScreamingOutLoud GOLD, Cumberland, Rhode Island
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i really love this poem. mainly because it is sick and twisted in a lovely sort of way. I think its absolutly beautiful in every way. =]

on May. 24 2009 at 10:42 pm
tigeress3 PLATINUM, Dayton, Ohio
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A wonderful poem, but slightly creepy and disgusting. Love it!

on May. 24 2009 at 8:05 pm
DreamingPoet89 DIAMOND, Hillsboro, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Life without love , is no life at all

Very Good!!! And from another Ohioan!!!!! yay

on May. 24 2009 at 6:40 pm
BreeLynne27 GOLD, Carmel, Indiana
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haha very well written i definitely enjoyed it keep writing

on May. 24 2009 at 6:48 am
writtenchaos BRONZE, Trabuco Canyon, California
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Creepy, sociopathic...

I LOVE it!!!

on May. 21 2009 at 4:02 am
Twilightnme SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"You dont know what you have until its gone"

Hmmm. Intruguing... and thoughtful in a way. I like it! I was amazed!...

on May. 18 2009 at 11:52 am
Mrz.kookie BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
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on May. 14 2009 at 2:38 pm
Kay Matthews PLATINUM, Bolton, Massachusetts
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Wow you are an amazing person.The dark humor you instill into your poetry is excellent. Your title is great too by the way.

on May. 4 2009 at 5:34 pm
ZiXiang Zhang SILVER, Ridgewood, New York
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hey guys! it's me, Z.Z. i'm glad that you guys like this poem. I wanted to try something different and bizarre and wrote this, haha. I'm looking forward to reading all of your works. Thanks all! :D

Tabby said...
on May. 4 2009 at 4:34 am
haha, I like this good outlook.

on May. 2 2009 at 8:09 pm
daisydee123 SILVER, Gotham City, Illinois
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im sorry but i dont get it!

on Apr. 26 2009 at 10:56 am
Hannibal Lecter and Clarice (can never remember her last name)

on Apr. 24 2009 at 9:00 pm
Courtnie Schrimsher, Orlando, Florida
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amazing. you are one of the best writers i have seen. (or read...) but anyways, that was soo good. ur out look on life