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Sickness MAG

By Anonymous

You wreak black
like nightfall.
You words are
dark and sharp.
You spear hearts
to see them bleed.
You run wild
with the sun
which so willingly
burns you.
Your harsh words
have never echoed
so clear and sound
with the wind.
Your words dug
gashes in the moon
and light the sky.
Dark looms and
has never hesitated.
We wonder why



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on Nov. 6 2009 at 7:48 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

wow. that's just rude. why would you write that? if you didn't like the poem why didn't you just not comment?

on Nov. 6 2009 at 7:46 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

hopefully you knew i was kidding. sorry. lol. i have... anger issues sometimes. and i hate it when people say sike. lol. i open my mouth (or fingers...?) when i probably shouldn't.

on Nov. 6 2009 at 7:44 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

yeah and you're like totally the nicest non-jerk i've ever met!

SIKE.

Jazzzy517 said...
on Nov. 6 2009 at 10:27 am
ur poem is awsome... i completely get what your saying... can u look at some of my poems... not to many people do... but ok... ur poem is great though

on Oct. 25 2009 at 6:57 pm
DinosoarJen DIAMOND, Scottsville, New York
86 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just another casualty.
It's sad but true.
And even dead I'm still ahead
of most of you.

Yea sorry! I type fast and it screws up my spelling. My bad. :]

epingel said...
on Oct. 15 2009 at 5:01 pm
This was a fabulous poem. I connected with it too; sort of. I really liked how you said "You wreak black like nightfall." That was good and it sounded mysterious and magnifficent. keep on writing.

on May. 28 2009 at 7:04 pm
MistressoftheNIght SILVER, Dexter, Missouri
8 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We start dieing the monent we are conseved" ----- anoynimes

your poem is great:) i love it it made my a lot better keep up the good work

on May. 28 2009 at 3:58 pm
CressFerriera GOLD, Richmondville, New York
16 articles 0 photos 9 comments
"You words are

dark and sharp."

Do you mean "YOUR" like, your words? What?



<--- Confused

on May. 21 2009 at 3:57 am
Twilightnme SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
6 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You dont know what you have until its gone"

I really enjoyed reading this. It is amazing. It made my day!...

Danielleg said...
on Apr. 28 2009 at 7:45 pm
that's so good jenna, i really like it.

on Mar. 25 2009 at 6:54 pm
Wow your articulation goes beyond words. Believe me this has to be what you do best!

on Mar. 25 2009 at 5:16 pm
xXTearxStainedXx BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments
i really liked it. wish i could write like that.

on Mar. 20 2009 at 8:41 pm
ThereIsAlwaysHope GOLD, Belfast, Other
19 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Miles to go before I sleep'
- Robert Frost

I loved it xD Keep it up :)

strawberry said...
on Mar. 18 2009 at 2:29 am
i thought it was really good keep up the good work

on Mar. 14 2009 at 8:57 pm
it was dark and twisted i loved it

on Mar. 4 2009 at 8:04 pm
kissingdawn331 SILVER, Palatine, Illinois
5 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when your hourglass runs out of sand you can't flip it over and start again."(changes weekly so check next weeks l8er)

leeleesammy ...if you c this I want you to know that the last poem you read was great also so STOP saying that ...thx anyways your poem is gr8...dark but that's what makes it gr8...some things just are dark

AlexW. BRONZE said...
on Mar. 3 2009 at 8:53 pm
AlexW. BRONZE, Parkville, Missouri
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good job that was great ^_^

on Mar. 3 2009 at 2:42 pm
AngelBaby94 GOLD, Kingston, Tennessee
15 articles 8 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
An Eye For An Eye Will Only Make The World Blind

Music was my refuge. I could crawl into the space between the notes and curl my back to loneliness.- Maya Angelou

Words mean more than what is set down on paper. It takes the human voice to infuse them with deeper meaning. Maya Angelou

This Is A Very Good Poem.

Duckie430 said...
on Feb. 27 2009 at 2:12 pm
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
0 articles 0 photos 228 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.”
"Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger."

this is very dark

on Feb. 27 2009 at 5:23 am
Jesselissa SILVER, Reynolds, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 3 comments
love it. expressive. detailed and vague at the same time.