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Visions I hear

April 10, 2014
By Decipher SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Decipher SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
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"To be a writer is a condition, not a profession." -Robert Frost

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Pounding on the walls inside
My head
My cranium
Skull
Don't touch me
I'm dead
Inside me, the voices
Loud as the blood curdling screams
Heard at night by me
And only me
The screams I can see
Not only hear
Scare me to death
The visions I hear.

© Max G., Hayward, CA

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Decipher SILVER said...
on Apr. 22 2014 at 7:49 pm
Decipher SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
5 articles 2 photos 29 comments

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&quot;To be a writer is a condition, not a profession.&quot; -Robert Frost

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Thank you  
TheLorax BRONZE said...
on Apr. 22 2014 at 7:48 pm
TheLorax BRONZE, Parkland, Florida
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Needs work. Very short and not much to it, just random words resulting to a certain topic. Keep trying though, you have lots of potential!
themajesticpoet BRONZE said...
on Apr. 22 2014 at 7:48 pm
themajesticpoet BRONZE, Bloomington, Other
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The rhythm is very good.  And it was simply well penned... Good job!
Decipher SILVER said...
on Apr. 14 2014 at 7:57 pm
Decipher SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
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&quot;To be a writer is a condition, not a profession.&quot; -Robert Frost

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Thank you very much!
Lucifer666 said...
on Apr. 14 2014 at 6:38 pm
Lucifer666, Hell, Other
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Nicely written, thid piece is thought provoking "the viosiond i can hear" brilliant line! Great job
Decipher SILVER said...
on Apr. 13 2014 at 8:30 pm
Decipher SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
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&quot;To be a writer is a condition, not a profession.&quot; -Robert Frost

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Thank you! 
TheUniverse said...
on Apr. 13 2014 at 8:29 pm
TheUniverse, Everywhere,, Other
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Exercise to stimulate, not to annihilate. The world wasn&#039;t formed in a day, and neither were we. Set small goals and build upon them.

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I love it, great rhythm and good vision!!!  Keep up the great writing!!