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Disaster, Disaster MAG

May 7, 2014
By Eshshah PLATINUM, Galloway, New Jersey
Eshshah PLATINUM, Galloway, New Jersey
32 articles 31 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep." -Robert Frost

We report faster
Watch the ticker
Don't check the time

This news just in
Her prospects are grim
Murder and war
Now look at this puppy
And come back for more

They're missing
It's tragic

It pays to pretend
To care

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This article has 4 comments.

on Mar. 16 2015 at 8:40 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
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Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

Is this..a sattire on news channels? I'm kind of clueless :p

on Jun. 5 2014 at 1:52 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

I agree with Oona about getting lost just a little bit. I really like the rhythm you have; it's like a chant. I mean, I'm sitting in math right now and I wanted to say it out loud just so my tongue could bask in the words. It was very crisp. The vibe that I got from it? Our new system is ADD and very vague. Good job.

on Jun. 2 2014 at 11:33 am
WOWriting SILVER, Broadstairs, Other
5 articles 0 photos 266 comments
I like the beat in this, it's steady and stays true. The meaning behind it is clever and original :)

on May. 31 2014 at 11:26 pm
sullivano17 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
23 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can't make up anything anymore. The world itself is a satire. All you're doing is recording it. - Art Buchwald

i like the first 5 lines and the last 4 best. i got a little lost in the middle, so i would try to be more clear there to make it stronger. good job(: