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dont over think it

June 22, 2014
By Popcornjazz SILVER, Gahana, Ohio
Popcornjazz SILVER, Gahana, Ohio
5 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live life while you can


People think too much,they travel all the way out there and don't come back. When you think of something you over think it never knowing it's right there in front of your eyes all this time. Time passes by and you're still looking for it. You never know what you're looking for until you think straight...until you find what you're looking for. So don't over think it take your time. Think about it and seek what you're looking for. Find your treasure...and claim your gold before someone steels it and takes it away...forever.



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on Jun. 29 2014 at 3:56 pm
Sherlocklives SILVER, Mnt. Marion, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Among them, not of them" ~Lord Byron

"I may be on the side of the angels, but don't think for one second that I *am* one of them." ~Sherlock

This is a great peice of writing! The only thing I would suggest is to seperate your poems into lines and stanzas so that it is easier to read. Other than that, 5/5! Good job!

on Jun. 25 2014 at 2:41 pm
deeplythinking GOLD, Orlando, Florida
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Simple and concise.  The poem provides rhthym and voice and this combined with motivational words makes it a 5/5 Great job!

on Jun. 25 2014 at 2:29 pm
TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
24 articles 7 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Here is a small fact: You are going to die." ~The Book Thief
"You have no stupidity inside of your adorable little self." ~Mikey Pasterik

This has some awesome style and feel to it. It seems like it's all over the place in a way, yet it's all put together and makes complete sense. I love the writing- it's great. The only thing I would change is perhaps placing more grammar into the text to make it easier to read, so it's more set up like a poem. Other than that, I love it. Awesome job!

on Jun. 25 2014 at 1:38 pm
HayatC. PLATINUM, Louisville, Kentucky
25 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do not pray for an easy life, pray for the strength to endure a difficult one."

This was great and full of valuable advice that I will keep in mind ! 5/5 stars, nice job!