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How i felt that day

July 30, 2014
By lastingbreath16 DIAMOND, Lake Alfred, Florida
lastingbreath16 DIAMOND, Lake Alfred, Florida
54 articles 3 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
screw it all if life gives u lemons do what ever you feel the need to do with them.


She asked me how I felt that day
And I replied:
I’m ok but I’m gone
No longer holding on
To something you can’t see
To something you will never understand

She asked me why I was quiet, that day
And to her I simply stated:
I’m just remembering
Of simple times
When we all had simple lives
And I wasn’t always this way

She asked me who I was, that day
All I said was:
I’m usually the one who laughs and smiles
With all my friends
Having fun not caring about a thing

She asked me what had happen, that day
I sat there for a moment and said:
Some things went wrong
They found out
How life wasn’t so perfect
And I wasn’t really sane

She asked me where I was going, that day
And to her I simply said:
I don’t know where I’m going
I don’t really care
As long as I’m back
With the ones who truly matter



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on Jan. 25 2015 at 1:15 pm
lastingbreath16 DIAMOND, Lake Alfred, Florida
54 articles 3 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
screw it all if life gives u lemons do what ever you feel the need to do with them.

Thank you!

on Jan. 25 2015 at 1:14 pm
lastingbreath16 DIAMOND, Lake Alfred, Florida
54 articles 3 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
screw it all if life gives u lemons do what ever you feel the need to do with them.

Thank you!

on Jan. 24 2015 at 9:30 pm
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
2 articles 2 photos 347 comments
Yet again another amazing piece! I am sure many can relate to your poem. It is nicely written and just packed with so much emotion

on Sep. 17 2014 at 5:23 pm
elycavill SILVER, Samobor, Other
5 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Leave nothing but footprints,
Take nothing but pictures,
Kill nothing but time.

Really nice and really sad, good poem! 

on Aug. 11 2014 at 10:26 am
lastingbreath16 DIAMOND, Lake Alfred, Florida
54 articles 3 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
screw it all if life gives u lemons do what ever you feel the need to do with them.

Thank you! That means a lot to me and I'm very happy that you like/love my poem! 

on Aug. 8 2014 at 5:30 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Wow. This is amazing. I love this, your poem. It's full of you and raw emotion and honesty and amazingness. Thank you for sharign this.