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Demons.

November 13, 2014
By Abi-street GOLD, Birmingham, Other
Abi-street GOLD, Birmingham, Other
17 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Try to be a rainbow in someone’s cloud. - Maya Angelou


Sitting alone watching the fears arise,
Waiting for a decent sunrise.

Dark thoughts clouding the path,
It’s time to stop looking back.

Hopes are hushed by icy fears,
Nothing can silence the deadly quivers.

The violent creations in my mind,
Sure do know when to unwind.

The demons lurking in my heart,
Slowly and forcefully tear us apart.

These broken words I cannot say,
Really do ruin my day.
 



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on Jan. 7 2015 at 10:55 am
Abi-street GOLD, Birmingham, Other
17 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Try to be a rainbow in someone’s cloud. - Maya Angelou

yeah :) and thank you :) i hope i do one day :) thanks again :)

on Jan. 6 2015 at 11:56 am
Thefanatasticagirlie101 SILVER, Euless, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"The best love is the kind that awakens the soul; that makes us reach for more, that plants the fire in our hearts and brings peace to our mind. That's what I hope to give you forever." ~The Notebook

Well, at least you have writing to help express your feelings about your personal experience. You're going to become a famous author one day, and then I'll say.... "I knew that person before that person was famous!"

on Jan. 6 2015 at 8:32 am
Abi-street GOLD, Birmingham, Other
17 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Try to be a rainbow in someone’s cloud. - Maya Angelou

I'm glad you like it :) thank-you :) and lets just say personal experiences...

on Dec. 30 2014 at 6:43 pm
Thefanatasticagirlie101 SILVER, Euless, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The best love is the kind that awakens the soul; that makes us reach for more, that plants the fire in our hearts and brings peace to our mind. That's what I hope to give you forever." ~The Notebook

When I read your work, Abi-street, it touches something in my heart that I've never felt before. You take me to an alternate universe, and make me put life's perspective as not just a happy ball of sunshine. I wonder where you get the inspiration to write such emotional work, without being too detailed.

on Nov. 21 2014 at 12:00 pm
Abi-street GOLD, Birmingham, Other
17 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Try to be a rainbow in someone’s cloud. - Maya Angelou

exactly:) im really happy you liked it 

on Nov. 20 2014 at 11:39 am
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
Thou may think of me as desired, to idolize or villanize me whichever you may choose. but gaze upon me and thou sall not see the husk of a man! for all my sins and all my bliss, i am anything but hollow <br /> -Ansem_Unlimited

I like this one alot, there is alot of good emotional context, which means to me like you wrote it in a way that I can feel the emotions you felt while writing it, but at the same time you're not explaining everything to death. 

on Nov. 17 2014 at 2:15 pm
Abi-street GOLD, Birmingham, Other
17 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Try to be a rainbow in someone&rsquo;s cloud. - Maya Angelou

thank you so much , glad you liked it :)

on Nov. 17 2014 at 10:31 am
authoress17 SILVER, Evans City, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If there is no such thing as magic...then what is writing?.&quot;-authoress17 (me)

Your poem is lovely! Great work. It really made me think and I had to reread it. Wonderful use of emotion.