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Everyday

March 12, 2015
By coolbeans101 SILVER, South San Francisco, California
coolbeans101 SILVER, South San Francisco, California
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Everyday
(an ode to a spider)

I hate when people try to kill me
I just stay in one place and people freak out
When they try to swat at me, of course I will jump down
I don’t mean to jump on you
I don’t have very good eyesight during the day
So please don’t hate me
I try to get all the moths and the nasty gnats out of your house
I try to make myself at home around your house in time so you won’t see me
But just because I have eight legs doesn't mean I’m fast enough to hit every corner in your house
I like the humans that don’t try to kill me
When they see me they don’t get scared
Rather they appreciate me
And they put me on a piece of paper and show me out the door
And I guess my visit is over
And my cycle starts again
Probably not with someone so kind
-J.L. Padilla
 


The author's comments:

I personally don't like spiders and everytime I see them I always freakout.  And I try to kill them because I don't need spiders in my house.  I can live just fine, with gnats and moths in my house.


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on Apr. 8 2015 at 7:57 pm
BeautyWhispers PLATINUM, Nevada City, California
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Be Yourself, Be Unique, Be Me. :) - By BeautyWhispers

Please if you could give me feedback that would be a blessing thnks!

on Apr. 8 2015 at 7:57 pm
BeautyWhispers PLATINUM, Nevada City, California
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Favorite Quote:
Be Yourself, Be Unique, Be Me. :) - By BeautyWhispers

I think it's great! I personally thought it was unique to do the spiders perspective, definitely not my style, but it's great to find something new every once in a while right? ;)

on Apr. 8 2015 at 4:12 pm
coolbeans101 SILVER, South San Francisco, California
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thanks it means a lot to hear other people like my work. (:

on Apr. 8 2015 at 3:54 pm
elycavill SILVER, Samobor, Other
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Leave nothing but footprints,<br /> Take nothing but pictures,<br /> Kill nothing but time.

Nice play with perspective and , also, the structure of the poem- strong start ( word hate ) and then to circle it up the last line- "and my cycle starts again Probably not with someone so kind). Nice work

on Apr. 8 2015 at 3:40 pm
coolbeans101 SILVER, South San Francisco, California
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thanks so much (:

on Apr. 7 2015 at 3:32 pm
Darke_Moone GOLD, Melrose, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Some people are worth melting for.&quot; ~Olaf the snowman ^.^

I like this! I like the idea of doing a viewpoint from a spider's perspective. :3