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i see you

April 8, 2016
By RainWriter GOLD, Rochester, New York
RainWriter GOLD, Rochester, New York
12 articles 10 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If not me, who? If not now, when?" -Emma Watson, Gender Equality is Your Issue Too, Speech at the United Nations


I see you out of the corner of my eye,

watching,

like a predator watches his prey,

Eyes crinkled with happiness.

You smile not with your mouth,

but your eyes,

hands,

heart.

I watch you,

You watch her,

and that's it,

isn't it?

Life happens,

and the glint in your eye fades out,

like the sun at dusk,

giving way to beauty,

A sunset,

before the light diminishes,

and all that's left is dark.

But I see you.

I see the twinkle of stars left,

sitting on the black blue blanket of night,

refusing to let the light leave your eyes.

And so I stay,

and watch the stars twinkle,

Until they too fade,

abd give way to dawn.



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Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Aug. 31 2016 at 5:17 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 631 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them.&quot;<br /> Henry David Thoreau<br /> <br /> &quot;I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once.&quot;<br /> John Green

I love the rhythm of this poem, each line flows perfectly with the other. Keep writing! :)