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Chained To The Bond Of Love

February 28, 2017
By JJ_Lone PLATINUM, Davenport, Washington
JJ_Lone PLATINUM, Davenport, Washington
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Eyes closed.
Screaming mind.
You can't run.
You can't hide.

Soft touch.
Gripping hands.
Stuck on a
different land.

Breathless.
Beating heart.
Butterflies.
Can't part.

Light kisses.
Rough touch.
Holding close.
My crutch.

Eyes open.
Smile wide.
Can't leave
my side.

You're mine.
Forever yours.
Don't worry.
Love sores.

You and me
Always and forever

Chained to the bond of love.



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on Mar. 14 2017 at 10:37 am
JJ_Lone PLATINUM, Davenport, Washington
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Thank you so much :D

on Mar. 12 2017 at 7:59 pm
tigerlilyorange SILVER, Lexington, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Whatever you can do or dream you can, begin it. Boldness has genius, power, and magic in it. Goethe

This is terrific!! a few comments as you asked: If you say smile wide instead of smiling wide the syllables will match up better. in the second to last stanza, if you said something about love's sores instead of soars, it would connect the toe idea of crutch chain being being something you are telling someone not to worry about. Also, I think the ending is not as strong as the rest of the poem, maybe because it is all one sentence instead of the short statements previous. overall though it is very good!