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Done.
May 12, 2017
Under the moon
Under the stars
We realized what we are
We were free
You loved me
But now youre gone
But I cant go on
I guess I´m am done
© Jasmine R., Bourbon, MI
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addictwithapen PLATINUM said...
on May. 28 2017 at 10:12 am
Remember to use apostrophes in contractions, so “can’t” and “you’re”. Use only “I am” or “I’m” in the last line, because having “I’m am” is repetitive. This is a good start to a poem. I would recommend expanding it to illustrate how exactly the speaker is “done”. The ending seems a bit abrupt, and adding more about the speaker’s feelings could remedy that.
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