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Snowflakes

January 6, 2012
By Hetalia-otaku SILVER, Sweden, Maine
Hetalia-otaku SILVER, Sweden, Maine
5 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Little fragile flakes
Dancing through the frigid air
Turning the world white.


The author's comments:
I love snow! When you're in Maine, you kinda have to love it.

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on Apr. 9 2012 at 10:29 am
Eshshah PLATINUM, Galloway, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep." -Robert Frost

I love Haikus and this is one of my favorites! good job!

on Mar. 14 2012 at 11:47 am
Choosing2Live4Christ PLATINUM, Wausaukee, Wisconsin
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In Wisconsin it's the same with snow :D  but we have an early spring this year, however your Haiku is awesome  :D

on Jan. 20 2012 at 8:54 am
bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM, Burlington, Massachusetts
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The personification and vivid imagery add a nice touch! Well done!

.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 7:57 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Favorite Quote:
( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

5,7,5, Beautiful, fragile snow fall, I agree the world does look some what white drowning in snow, I think the last line could be said a bit stronger !

butterfly123 said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 12:07 pm
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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so pretty! well written!

on Jan. 9 2012 at 12:07 pm
Donutboy345 BRONZE, Swansboro, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Hey, that's my pen!"

I like it, though I could do without the snow where I am. I never was much of a fan of haikus, either... But I like it!