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Haiku Headache

August 9, 2013
By Mamonde PLATINUM, Seoul, Other
Mamonde PLATINUM, Seoul, Other
20 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Oh, I'm crazy to the bone."


Counting syllables
Squeeze my thoughts into short lines
I need aspirin


The author's comments:
Haikus are fun but menacing little things.

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on Sep. 15 2013 at 1:38 pm
WishfulDoer GOLD, Portland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
If ignorance is bliss, why is our country so complicated?

I LOVE THIS. It's so true. Haikus are kind of perceived as the easy-way-out poem, but anyone who has tried to fit a world of meaning into a five-seven-five format knows better. This is great.

on Aug. 20 2013 at 10:58 am
Mamonde PLATINUM, Seoul, Other
20 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Oh, I'm crazy to the bone."

Oops, I made a mistake... the last line should be 5 syllables...This is why haikus are menacing little creatures.

on Aug. 20 2013 at 10:56 am
Mamonde PLATINUM, Seoul, Other
20 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Oh, I'm crazy to the bone."

Thanks for the comment! I enjoy writing haikus- This is a haiku as well ;)

on Aug. 16 2013 at 11:06 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.&rdquo;<br /> - Martin Luther King Jr.

I totally agree, and really do love this haiku. Tremendous job.