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January 1, 2015
By Thefanatasticagirlie101 SILVER, Euless, Texas
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"The best love is the kind that awakens the soul; that makes us reach for more, that plants the fire in our hearts and brings peace to our mind. That's what I hope to give you forever." ~The Notebook

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Love is like a gift                                                                         It wounds people now and then                                                     With an open heart

© Louisa L., Pleasanton, CA

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This is my intake on being too mislead in one's love life. Don't judge me, this just popped outta my head.

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ansem_unlimited PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 15 2015 at 9:19 pm
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
33 articles 0 photos 140 comments

Favorite Quote:
Thou may think of me as desired, to idolize or villanize me whichever you may choose. but gaze upon me and thou sall not see the husk of a man! for all my sins and all my bliss, i am anything but hollow <br /> -Ansem_Unlimited

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any time :)
Thefanatasticagirlie101 SILVER said...
on Jan. 15 2015 at 6:13 pm
Thefanatasticagirlie101 SILVER, Euless, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The best love is the kind that awakens the soul; that makes us reach for more, that plants the fire in our hearts and brings peace to our mind. That&#039;s what I hope to give you forever.&quot; ~The Notebook

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Thanks again for your insightful feedback @ansem_unlimited
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 15 2015 at 11:59 am
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
33 articles 0 photos 140 comments

Favorite Quote:
Thou may think of me as desired, to idolize or villanize me whichever you may choose. but gaze upon me and thou sall not see the husk of a man! for all my sins and all my bliss, i am anything but hollow <br /> -Ansem_Unlimited

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you're a talented writer... alot of the people on this site are.but all you need is your own approval, without that, you could have a million people cheering you on & never meet your goals. but regardless I give you my support
Thefanatasticagirlie101 SILVER said...
on Jan. 5 2015 at 2:02 pm
Thefanatasticagirlie101 SILVER, Euless, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The best love is the kind that awakens the soul; that makes us reach for more, that plants the fire in our hearts and brings peace to our mind. That&#039;s what I hope to give you forever.&quot; ~The Notebook

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Thank you, I'm pretty new here so I need feedback like this. Thanks a lot.
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 5 2015 at 9:23 am
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
33 articles 0 photos 140 comments

Favorite Quote:
Thou may think of me as desired, to idolize or villanize me whichever you may choose. but gaze upon me and thou sall not see the husk of a man! for all my sins and all my bliss, i am anything but hollow <br /> -Ansem_Unlimited

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a beautiful haiku but my insight into this type of poetry lies elsewhere, so I'm sorry to say I'm not experienced enough to give you any solid advice but it was enjoyable to read!