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found among butterflies

April 13, 2015
By Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P


no, no more running


tear from this cavity and

 

sell me a feeling


The author's comments:

Things have been floating through my head, butterfly-style. I don't know what to say.


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on Jun. 8 2015 at 9:56 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

Thank you, Abigail. I also really like when people take different views on my pieces. They're open for everyone's interpretation.

on Jun. 8 2015 at 11:54 am
ABIGAIL.S PLATINUM, Trenton, Ohio
37 articles 3 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only you can start a change you want"

I love that people can read this and take it in many different ways. I love that what I got from reading it could have been different from what someone else did.

on Jun. 7 2015 at 8:20 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

Thank you very much, Luv.

on Jun. 7 2015 at 10:54 am
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 199 comments

Favorite Quote:
A miracle is just another name for hard work<br /> -Minho in &quot;To The Beautiful You&quot;

Your spacing here gives the haiku a light delicate feeling, good job ^^

on Jun. 7 2015 at 2:03 am
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

It is actually a partner piece to 'finding', if that's what you're referring to. And you can take it any way you wish, it's rather versatile.

on Jun. 6 2015 at 12:38 am
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don&#039;t acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)

I'm not sure how I was supposed to take it, but in the way I did, I could relate XD it's interesting, and with the one I read before this, It could fit well lol good job

on Apr. 21 2015 at 7:36 am
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

Thank you, Robot. I've been doing my best to write, and this just popped into my head while listening to butterfly-related music, so I'm afraid it's rather random.

on Apr. 20 2015 at 3:25 pm
RobotPenn. SILVER, El Paso, Texas
8 articles 1 photo 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Profound change is cumulative.&quot;

Lovely, as always. I love the reference to butterflies. The title is as much a part of the story as the poem. And, as always, you've proven that one doesn't need 3,000 words to make a story. Gorgeous, Just gorgeous. :)