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April 26, 2015
By BoobooBeetle DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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BoobooBeetle DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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“A good novel tells us the truth about its hero; but a bad novel tells us the truth about its author.”
G.K. Chesterton

"And you, you ridiculous people, you expect me to help you."
Denis Johnson

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Life engulfs the land,

Blooming lively trees painted

An enchanting green.

© Erika W., Milford, CT

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ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM said...
on May. 18 2015 at 12:36 am
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don't acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)

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I'm liking it, simple, elegant, I think I'll call you the Haiku king (or queen, we know of no genders) XD keep writing lol
Beila BRONZE said...
on May. 17 2015 at 8:04 pm
Beila BRONZE, Palo Alto, California
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I love the gorgeous imagery in this poem. This is a perfect example of what I meant in my comment to your "Deck of Cards." The verbs and word choice create a fluid blossoming of this image of spring. Well done!
MysticMusic ELITE said...
on May. 7 2015 at 10:03 pm
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Beautiful descriptions paired up with images that just blossom in my mind. I think this should be considered a piece of art. It's bursting with life and energy.