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A Breath of Water

April 7, 2023
By Exegious_Mulcifer GOLD, Denver, Colorado
Exegious_Mulcifer GOLD, Denver, Colorado
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Each stroke is a breath I will hold

Each breath is a chance to be bold

To be bold and strong

To be sharp and young

And every time we will win gold. 


The author's comments:

I love to swim, and these are some of the thoughts I have about swimming! Please (kindly) tell me what you think about it!


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on May. 8 2023 at 3:35 pm
Exegious_Mulcifer GOLD, Denver, Colorado
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I think they meant stroke. The poem says stoke. Thats too bad. Other wise lovely poem, I love it.