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Heaven can wait... I'll take Hawaii

May 12, 2011
By Brooke-Rose BRONZE, Sturgis, South Dakota
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&quot;Friendship is like peeing on yourself. Everyone can see it, but only you can feel the warmth it brings!&quot;<br /> =)

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There is no place better than Hawaii
Laying on the beach
Looking up at the clouds in the sky
Oceans are in reach
This is where I want to live and die

© Grace L., Bacolod City, Philippines

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I have loved Hawaii ever since I was a little girl when my parents took me there for a vacation. It is my favorite place in the world! I want to go back!!!
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