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It Was Just A Dream

June 27, 2011
By Come-n-Gone GOLD, Unionville, Missouri
Come-n-Gone GOLD, Unionville, Missouri
10 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
Isn't it funny how it only takes a few seconds to say hi, but forever to say goodbye?

It was just a dream, not real life.
But somehow you were there.
You were sweet and kind and understanding,
You had bright green eyes and dark brown hair.
I never met you once in my life,
And when I wake up there’s a giant mark on my heart.
I look around my room full of posters,
And started crying in the dark.
I know I never met you before,
But somehow I miss you so much.
I miss your love and I miss your looks,
And I definitely miss your touch.
When you cradle me in your arms,
And you whisper you love me in my ear.
I think of all these things right now,
And I start to shed a tear.
I can’t believe how much I love,
A stranger I never met.
But even after I wake up,
My heart is something that you kept.

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This article has 3 comments.

on Nov. 30 2011 at 7:02 pm
Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
5 articles 10 photos 87 comments

Well done. Very, very well done. It flows, the rhymes aren't forced and work together very well, and over all I could read it without any distractions of structure issues.

Much love to this, really.

on Nov. 30 2011 at 6:48 pm
SophiaWood GOLD, New City, New York
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AMAZING. I love this so much. So descriptive and emotional. I could feel the love and pain. made me want to cry :')


on Jul. 19 2011 at 11:54 am
LyricalBeauty GOLD, Fontana, California
14 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
" 'I am happy' that's just the saddest lie..."

"I think that all the silence is worse than all the violence. Fear is such a weak emotion, that's why I despise it..."

This was really great! Dreaming of a lover you have yet to met; I've done it all too many times hahah. Great job(=

If you can, please check out my poems. Comments/Rates are always appreciated. Thanks!(=