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If only death would knock at my door

December 5, 2012
By Mr.Poetman PLATINUM, Union City, Indiana
Mr.Poetman PLATINUM, Union City, Indiana
28 articles 2 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You miss 100 percent of the shots you never take.” -Wayne Gretzy


My heart is weak
Outlook on life is bleak
Exhausted from carrying my heavy heart
I’m wounded heart ripped apart
My soul weeps
My heart bleeds
I’m no longer who I use to be
I’m completely changed after what happened to me
I was transformed when you walked out of my life
I haven’t been quit the same since that night
My heart is still far from being strong
I still don’t get it what I did so wrong
Because of you my heart is weak
My outlook on life is bleak
I am so tired of being blue
It is all because of one reason……….you
I made my first mistake when I asked you out
Ending it then would have been the safest route
Too bad we didn’t end it early
Instead we rushed it in a hurry
Slowly my heart is forgetting your affection
And slowly I’m beginning to lose my connection
With reality
Wishing for mortality
If only death would knock at my door
I’d lose all feelings for the ungrateful little w****



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on Dec. 18 2012 at 12:10 pm
Shadowpomgurl PLATINUM, Canton, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I was NEVER that drunk." -Johnny Depp as Jack Sparrow

that was good! i liked the last line the most, heehee! ;)

on Dec. 14 2012 at 2:59 pm
country-cutey GOLD, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
10 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont say it if you dont mean it because i might actually belive it

wow u have some awsome talent there!!!!!! ur gonna be famous someday for ur work and i am gonna be ur biggest fan :D keep on writing!

on Dec. 13 2012 at 12:24 pm
Opticalillusion DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
64 articles 13 photos 59 comments

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I am an artist bound only for the poet's glory....But only achieve half of the success that my dreams aspire to find, And to what do the whispers tell me of this failure...To what end to they haunt my nightmares...my eternal dark dreams...

hrmm its good im not a big fan of romance poems  

on Dec. 9 2012 at 9:18 pm
Mr.Poetman PLATINUM, Union City, Indiana
28 articles 2 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You miss 100 percent of the shots you never take.” -Wayne Gretzy

sorry for what?

on Dec. 9 2012 at 9:16 pm
everybody-needs-some-body-to-love, Tulsa, Oklahoma
0 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
EVERY BODY NEEDS SOMEBODY TO LOVE IN I CHOOSE YOU. <3

o michael that was...... sad and awsome your really good. um im srry