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You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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on Oct. 1 2009 at 12:04 pm
kendraelysia SILVER, Turner, Maine
9 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To risk nothing is to risk everything."

Very well done. I enjoyed this a lot. :)

on Oct. 1 2009 at 11:23 am
diis iis really guud

ii liik iit :)

BabyDoll said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 10:16 am
wow that was amazing, as i as i was reading i could hear the beat and everything. It was amazing.

on Oct. 1 2009 at 5:16 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you so much, I'm glad that you all like it!!!!!! :)

Angel44 SILVER said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 10:09 pm
Angel44 SILVER, Mesa, Arizona
6 articles 0 photos 7 comments
I really like it!!

on Sep. 30 2009 at 7:49 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you so much, I really appreciate that you took the time to comment!!! :) Really, that's cool!!! :) Thanks again!

on Sep. 30 2009 at 6:40 pm
dreamer112 GOLD, Burnsville, Minnesota
14 articles 1 photo 32 comments
I loved your song. I actually used that same picture for one of my poems.

on Sep. 30 2009 at 2:48 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you so much!!!!!!

on Sep. 30 2009 at 2:43 pm
sarahgrace BRONZE, Westminster, Maryland
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments
I really like this, it's very well written and I like the rhyme.