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As i Fade away

March 10, 2010
By hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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You said you don't care
You said it's not the same
You've said many other things
Words that scald words that maim

I know that things will never be the same
I know i will continue to fade
Fade out of you mind out of your out of your heart...away
But that doesn't change the way...No, I think i'll wait
As i fade away


The author's comments:
I wrote this as a poem but thought i could be lyrics. So tell me if you think it makes a better poem or song lyrics

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on May. 12 2011 at 12:39 pm
Mrs.Lautner GOLD, Fife Lake, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
someone asked me if i knew you <br /> i turned my head wiped my tears away <br /> and said no not anymore<br /> <br /> Gravitation isn&#039;t responsible for people falling in love.<br /> <br /> The hottest love has the coldest ending

love it

 


on Mar. 29 2010 at 12:43 am
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream&quot;

better as a poem  it's a great poem and could be transformed into a song but you have to write alot more for it to be a song