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Fearful Tears

December 9, 2011
By AngelicSoul_DemonicHeart GOLD, Jefferson City, Missouri
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AngelicSoul_DemonicHeart GOLD, Jefferson City, Missouri
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"Dream like you'll live forever. Live like you'll die tomorrow." -James Dean. I love this quote!!!!!! :)

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You wipe away my tears.
You give me comfort and
you chase away my fears.

Much pain my heart bears
and you take it from me.
You wipe away my tears.

As your presence nears
peace settles over me.
You chase away my fears.

I hope your heart hears
as I confess my love.
You wipe away my tears.

From your eyes, sadness clears
and joy settles in.
You chase away my fears.

I can’t believe my ears
when you say you love me too.
You wipe away my tears.
You chase away my fears.

© Jorrdyn K., Washougal, WA

The author's comments:
This was another Creative Writing assignment and one I very much enjoyed. Mostly because eight of my lines were just two lines being repeated. The rest was like watching a story unfold. When this was read aloud to the class, they all asked me who I was writing about and I was stuck. Some asked if it was a boy I liked, some asked if it was God (which was very deep for them, I was impressed). But I wrote it like I was writing a love story. The kind found in books. Not anyone I know or knew. But I thank the class for showing interest in my poem. Thank you for the up in my confidence.
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