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Autumn Leaf

January 5, 2012
By kate12345me GOLD, Sydney, Other
kate12345me GOLD, Sydney, Other
11 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Rather than love, than money, than fame, give me truth." - Thoreau
"Sometimes you're flush and sometimes you're bust, and when you're up, it's never as good as it seems, and when you're down, you never think you'll be up again, but life goes on."


Brown and orange, with faint whispers of green,
A streak of golden boasts a handsome gleam
The fiery red, angry and daring,
The gentle, blunt yellow, friendly and caring
The dark black freckles, unwanted but completing,
A mix between maroon and amber, colourfully cheating
The leaf flutters down, stays there for a while,
Until a little girl picks it up, admiring it with a smile.


The author's comments:
I love all seasons - nature is continually amazing me with its beautiful changes and its spontaneous bursts of surprise. I don't want to be cliched and say the best part is jumping in the piles and hearing the crunch. Instead, for me, the best part is when you find a drooping leaf on a tree and upon closer inspection, you find it's not red, as you initially thought, it's all different colours as if the tree just couldn't choose.

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on Jan. 13 2012 at 1:59 am
kate12345me GOLD, Sydney, Other
11 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Rather than love, than money, than fame, give me truth." - Thoreau
"Sometimes you're flush and sometimes you're bust, and when you're up, it's never as good as it seems, and when you're down, you never think you'll be up again, but life goes on."

Thank you, I am so glad I have some feedback! xx

SchiZo GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2012 at 7:28 pm
SchiZo GOLD, Springtown, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
I live at the speed of my mind, and love with the strength of my heart. I am happier than I have ever been. But only because i know where i have been.
-Corey Taylor

I love fall time. The colors remind me to just live. This is really good work.

on Jan. 7 2012 at 5:24 pm
shmam7624 SILVER, Evansville, Wisconsin
6 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
We must become the change we want to see
-Mahatma Gandhi

I love this poem! It has great rhymes and paints a beautiful picture as well.