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Hold Me Tight

May 2, 2012
By Bunnisawr17 GOLD, Orange, California
Bunnisawr17 GOLD, Orange, California
13 articles 6 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Blood Alone Moves The Wheel of Time.


How long has it been?
since I lost sight of you.

my heart trembles more
will you notice these tears?
even if far away I'll never forget your voice

Like the rain, they just
Quietly replay in my head

Hold me tight, if not so far from me
I didn't want to let you go
What hearts feels I can't deny anymore
I miss you- why wont these tears stop
and so I prayed
we shall soon meet again

How long must I wait until I see you
Eyes clouded with the night
even just a little precense
Still captures my lost heart

Hold me tight, threw the tears of lost smiles
Even in the land of broken shards
I won't lose myself
I love you- these feelings true and honest
tonight I'll shout outwards to the sky
reach him-Oh voice of mine

If the rain countine forever on
Could it dance along beside you

Hold me tight- if not so far from me
I didn't want to let you go
What hearts feels I can't deny anymore
I miss you- why won't these tears stop

I want to shout for you tonight
reach my heartful words I scream
Hold me Tight.
I miss you.


The author's comments:
Enjoy the first ever song I created and acutally finshed.

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on Dec. 8 2014 at 9:03 am
afloridagirl PLATINUM, Port Orange, Florida
22 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Maybe the Journey isn't so much about becoming anything but unbecoming everything that isn't really you

I think this song is amazing, what inspired you to write something like this?

on May. 6 2012 at 3:19 am
Bunnisawr17 GOLD, Orange, California
13 articles 6 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Blood Alone Moves The Wheel of Time.

lol well i don't know I threw it togther randomly 

on May. 6 2012 at 2:26 am
LovelyDuckling GOLD, Hamilton, Montana
16 articles 0 photos 125 comments

Favorite Quote:
A vision without action is a hallucination.

im not exactly sure this poem is meant to be a song, however i do relate.... I like your genuine voice