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Loving Rap

August 1, 2013
By Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 433 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

Baby your beuiful the way you are,
Don't let no one ever change you at all,
You think thta your alone.crushed and down,
that your heart can't take much more of the thumping and a pound,

The boys running and hiding calling there abuse,
but you are who you are and that's legit,
So baby come over walk away from the ledge,
For you and i are two of a feather,
A smile as one is just as bright as the sun
And if you were to leave my sorrows would find me

So step aside leave your hand off the trigger ,
For you are beuiyful, and smart, and my only one,
Your complete my heart like its 1+1.

The boys and girl can all fall and drown but you and i will forever be off the ground.
You are my life girl and that's a fact
Your my sunshine that fills in my cracks,
Your my home where i belong,
And your my heart that always beats strong,

So lean on me your strong oak tree and we'll carry each other across these seas,
Cause now you and are are together and try as you might i won't leave you never.
For girl your not just some loner,
Your my soul and that's all i know

The author's comments:
My take on trying a rap

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This article has 4 comments.

on Nov. 5 2013 at 11:08 am
KaylaaLovee GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
14 articles 1 photo 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imperfection is beauty. Madness is genius. And its better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring. And when it comes down to it, I let them think what they want. If they care enough to bother with what I do, I'm already better than them."

Hahah i love it !!

Scar_Wolf said...
on Aug. 10 2013 at 7:02 pm
Scar_Wolf, St. Petersburg, Other
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Tis better to loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

its is amazing you go girl write me more!!

on Aug. 8 2013 at 1:04 am
MeggieMills SILVER, Baltimore, Maryland
9 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
I write...so therefor I am a Writer.

Very Beautiful Grace! Good work! Only a few typos but the idea , the rhymes, the music I imagine in it is beautiful. Keep writing! =D

on Aug. 7 2013 at 5:31 pm
DeathOfAStar GOLD, Kailua, Hawaii
11 articles 1 photo 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Emancipate yourself from mental slavery"

- Bob Marley

i like ittt ;D