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My hope

September 1, 2013
By Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 433 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

The window is small,
its time to move on,
find a place where I belong,
you asked if I cared if I would still be there,
the truth is with you by my side,
I've never felt more alive,

you're the one who I Hold dear,
I know its not much,
But it's all that I have,
I give you my heart to have,
You've stolen my heart from the first time we met,
Is this true love? A fable? a bluff?

I look to the sky,
the stars up so high they twinkle and shine,
looking down at us they asked why,
I laugh out aloud and tell them flat out,
it was fate deciding our luck,

I know its unfair, I lead to despair,
But I look to your eyes,
and my cloak falls down,
down to the lies and secrets I held,
I'm an open book now haven't you tell?
for you are my world,
its rather unheard that there's anyone in this world,
Beside you.

The author's comments:
This is a song for someone very special to me.

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midnightwoah said...
on Aug. 4 2014 at 11:06 pm
midnightwoah, Monett, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"We accept the love we think we deserve." -Stephen Chbosky

This is so far the best song lyrics I've read from you! After reading, I liked to combine the first and last sentences together to get, "The window is small/Beside you" because they go so well. Five stars :)

Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Feb. 3 2014 at 4:46 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 631 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

I love this, Luna! The use of the commas is a great technique, and I love the way you described the stars :) Brilliant work, as usuaaaal :)

on Jan. 24 2014 at 5:07 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

Love it!!!!

on Sep. 21 2013 at 5:16 pm
PonderousPoet BRONZE, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
I may be as bad as the worst but thank God I am as good as the best.

Wonderful as is all your work!!  Who did you write it for!?!?!