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Loss Love

October 24, 2018
By Sarah_Gil PLATINUM, Greenwell Springs, Louisiana
Sarah_Gil PLATINUM, Greenwell Springs, Louisiana
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I wake up cold and alone, what did I do wrong

He left me alone in this filthy bog

The love I so lived like a tragic song

I feel as if I've been severally flogged


My heart beats very grimly, what a pity

The man I have so loved with another

The girl he's with is so, so pretty

It hurts me to see him with a lover


All I feel is a burning pain, my heart is glass

When he dares to hold onto her, it breaks

My soul weeps, stuck in this lonely impasse

I hate how he always makes my heart ache


I hate how he loves her with all his heart

It is my inclination that we didn't have to part

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This is my first sonnet.

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