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Love Sonnet

June 1, 2009
By Alexandra Sarzyniak BRONZE, La Mesa, California
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Since the day we met I knew me life changed,

You made me happy everyday we spent.

My emotions rearranged and highly

Ranked. It made me realize what life meant.

I spend most of my days thinking of you

And the love and joy you have brought to me.

Our love is so strong it has become true,

When I am I your presence I feel free.

The day I saw you it felt O so right

When I was around you I turn ed red.

My heart would skip a beat with you in sight,

I listen to each and every word said.

You said to me you would leave me never

Now lets live life together for ever.

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Gayboy said...
on Jan. 11 2017 at 6:18 am
Gay Gay Gay Gayest
LuluE said...
on Mar. 1 2016 at 8:40 am
Can i pls use this....
AwesomeWriter SILVER said...
on Jan. 22 2016 at 2:29 pm
AwesomeWriter SILVER, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;What light is to the eyes - what air is to the lungs - what love is to the heart, liberty is to the soul of man.<br /> Robert Green Ingersoll

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Awesome!!!!!! Keep writing from the heart!!!! It shows through and it's extremely original as well!
_msj23 said...
on Mar. 13 2015 at 4:29 pm
_msj23, Daly City, California
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nice poem!
kayleigh.marie BRONZE said...
on Jul. 8 2014 at 2:24 am
kayleigh.marie BRONZE, Kentwood, Louisiana
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a very sweet poem!
rokkotothezee GOLD said...
on Sep. 17 2013 at 10:25 pm
rokkotothezee GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Every poem doesn't have to be a Shakespearean masterpiece with heavy metaphors and fancy vocabulary. Sometimes simple is better. This was a simplistic poem with a lot of emotion and a powerful message. 5/5 in my opinion, great job! Keep writing! :)
WinterGreer SILVER said...
on Feb. 2 2013 at 9:52 pm
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That about sums it up, yeah.
VickyNickyKitty SILVER said...
on Dec. 21 2012 at 11:05 pm
VickyNickyKitty SILVER, Lincolnton, North Carolina
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Pretty poem.
DaleTheWhale BRONZE said...
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DaleTheWhale BRONZE, Tipp City, Ohio
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It's good, but too simple.
MiaUnwritten GOLD said...
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Amazing poem, i love it
D-wreck BRONZE said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 12:26 pm
D-wreck BRONZE, Charlotte, Vermont
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I like your poem, but the 2nd to last line it looks like you switched "never" to the end that way it would rhyme, I also think you should work on your grammar.
Belluna45 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 30 2011 at 9:50 pm
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This poem is really awesome i loved everything about it
Ale d.17 said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 2:42 pm
is a nice poem
AlwaysDanceInTheRain SILVER said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 10:27 am
AlwaysDanceInTheRain SILVER, Sidney, Nebraska
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This poem was sweet and nice but it seemed really simple and juvenile. Not a lot of substance or creativity
yessica said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 8:51 am
i really like the poem
MaryGabrielle BRONZE said...
on May. 21 2011 at 9:47 am
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I love it :) check out my poem Green-Eyed monster when you get a chance! I wrote it about a similar topic
_Asap BRONZE said...
on Mar. 2 2011 at 7:20 am
_Asap BRONZE, New London, Connecticut
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Im Loving The Vibe . Your Poetry Is Good :)
-143_ily. BRONZE said...
on Jan. 29 2011 at 4:20 pm
-143_ily. BRONZE, Over The Rainbow,Where The Skittles Are, Georgia
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Tagged as my favorite(: Beautimous!
nene937 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 13 2010 at 7:38 am
nene937 BRONZE, Dayton, Ohio
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I liked how the poem came together and you reminded me of a past relationship. I love this poem, and my class thought it was ok
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 2:58 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Vry nice... I like your choice of words...it makes a nice flow...you should check out some of my poems