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You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.


The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it

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on Nov. 4 2011 at 7:46 pm
Truetothering_24 GOLD, Queens, New York
10 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Trust Nobody

Wow i can so relate so simple but says it all amzing x33

on Nov. 3 2011 at 9:40 am

wonderful poem

 


on Oct. 31 2011 at 7:09 pm
babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
23 articles 10 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
wat doesnt kill you only makes you stronger

A poem as simple as this yet so relatable is such great work!

on Oct. 31 2011 at 2:02 pm
Dancing4Jesus BRONZE, Oceanside, California
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Really describes summer :)... I'm new on here and definitely needs more views check out my work, constructive criticism is what I need to help me become a better writer! Thanks guys and gals!

on Oct. 29 2011 at 11:06 pm
stillheartless PLATINUM, Eugene, Oregon
40 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you. I love you. I send this message through my fingers and into his, up his arm and into his heart. Hear me. I love you. And I'm sorry to leave you." -Jenny Downham

I cannot believe how well this explains last summer for me. This is trully stupendous.

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 27 2011 at 9:53 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

I love this so much... it's beautiful. If anyone has time would they mind checking out my poem... I'd sure appreciate it if you could! Please and thank you

on Oct. 25 2011 at 8:29 pm
EscapeSanity SILVER, Sahuache, Colorado
7 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Not all those who wander are lost
Is it better to be hurt by the raw truth, or comfortably deceived?

I love this poem! It relates to everyone and really gives the feeling of whats going on. I enjoyed this poem. :)

on Oct. 22 2011 at 7:36 pm
Belluna45 PLATINUM, Shelbyville, Kentucky
31 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Look after my heart- I've left it with you."
-Stephenie Meyer (Eclipse (Twilight #3))
"Either write something worth reading or do something wor
th writing."
-Benjamin Franklin
"A dishonest man you can always trust to be dishonest."
-Johnny Depp

Wow this is really great! It just shows how people change almost all the time.

on Oct. 18 2011 at 1:16 pm
RachaelSt BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
2 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
fghfthfth

i like pie

DeAunna said...
on Oct. 14 2011 at 10:48 am
DeAunna, Carrollton, Texas
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Very relatable, and I love the transition from points of view, has a good flow to it, and a nice topic. I really like it a lot :)

 


on Oct. 12 2011 at 4:56 am
CandyGirl636 GOLD, Searsport, Maine
11 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have a lot of faverote quotes.......
LOVE PEACE AND CHICKEN GREESE <3
HAKUNA MATATA
NEVER LET THE FEAR OF STRIKNIG OUT KEEP YOU FROM PLAYING THE GAME.
Pain is weekness levaving ones body.
I'm not random you just cant think as fast as me.

This is a very nice poem. I like how everyone can relate to it.

~If someone want's to give me some feedback on my work, I would like that greatly. :) Thanks


mhafner said...
on Oct. 10 2011 at 9:36 pm
I like that you wrote a poem that relates to everyday teenage lives. We all know of somebody who has changed and you always look back at how they used to be and when you write about something that people can relate to it's a lot more enjoyable and more readers will listen. This is a simple, and beautiful poem.

purpleink GOLD said...
on Oct. 9 2011 at 9:00 pm
purpleink GOLD, Pendleton, Oregon
17 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
The early bird gets the worm but the second rat gets the cheese.

There is more to life besides increasing its speed.

wow, i can really relate to this. it's so true! love it! (if anyone could give me some much needed feedback I'd really appreciate it-thanks!)

Cianni BRONZE said...
on Oct. 7 2011 at 9:26 am
Cianni BRONZE, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Nice poem it sounds like you miss someone in your life and i do too. my best friend i relate to you.

on Oct. 3 2011 at 10:41 am

this poem is very understanding because this kind of stuff happens all the time

 


2write said...
on Oct. 2 2011 at 3:31 am
2write, Dededo, Other
0 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
" I wasn't built for conformity, I was born to stand out from the crowd"
" In the end, it's not going to matter how many breaths you took but how many moment tsook your breath away:"- Chinese man
"I have tried, in my way, to be free."-Leonard Cohen

that was amazing 

2write said...
on Oct. 2 2011 at 3:30 am
2write, Dededo, Other
0 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
" I wasn't built for conformity, I was born to stand out from the crowd"
" In the end, it's not going to matter how many breaths you took but how many moment tsook your breath away:"- Chinese man
"I have tried, in my way, to be free."-Leonard Cohen

read it again 

on Sep. 26 2011 at 7:38 pm
Rosie_1030 BRONZE, Windber, Pennsylvania
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can tell someone there are 300 billion stars in the universe and they will believe you, but tell them there is wet paint on a bench, and they will have to touch it to be sure. ~ Unknown

This descibes the situation i'm in right now perfectly!! I lovee it! (:

Ha ha said...
on Sep. 26 2011 at 6:45 pm
It made no sense its not interested.

Carse99 said...
on Sep. 25 2011 at 3:03 am
Carse99, Paoli, Indiana
0 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forever ago, I have slept since then

This is so touching i really like what u did with it