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October 20, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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I am gone,
Yet I was here.
You are sitting,
Where I was near.
I slept in this bed,
I sat in that chair.
And though I'm not present,
I breathed this air.
I stayed in this room,
Yet left no trace.
I have now moved on,
To a different place.
No one knows,
Where that may be.
Our paths may cross,
Lets wait and see...

© Claire E., Bethesda, MD

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem in a hotel room and left it in the desk. I now keep a copy with me and I leave wherever I stay so next time your at a hotel...maybe this poem will be there too...
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jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 5:46 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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&quot;Don&#039;t gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold.&quot; <br /> <br /> &quot;You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer.&quot;

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i like how you wrote this! you kind of gave a sorrowful mood at first, but you ended the poem with possible happiness :) creative. this is a great poem too :) i like your work a lot!!
Alexx627 said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 2:42 pm
Alexx627, Moline, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
If you do what you did then you&#039;ll get what you got

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Oooo! It gave me chills! I like it...but it's almost creepy!
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 2:25 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Thanx:) I checked out some of ur stuff n it was rly nice too
BaBii_GhErL PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 1:24 pm
BaBii_GhErL PLATINUM, Wasilla, Alaska
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Loving someone who doesnt love u is not wrong its just painful!

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this poem is really nice...u should keep writing...his poem reminds me of my boyfriend rite now...lol...