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Dreamer Beware

October 23, 2009
By BriarRose PLATINUM, Seneca, Illinois
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BriarRose PLATINUM, Seneca, Illinois
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I don't need a rose. I want a daisy you picked for my hair. I don't want some fancy box of chocolate. I want a pink frosting cookie you made just for me. Lets skip the upscale restaraunt and have a picnic in the park.

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Enter into a great world of Dreams
With places of Light and Dark among things
Dreamer, beware all is not as it seems
Solid as Rock but real as Fairy wings
Tell me, do you see the young Maiden fair?
or the Prince of Darkness in the shadows?
Of Shadows and Sunlight, Dreamer beware
For how black the Shadows, none truly know
See the white Knight riding to his Princess
and the Witch of the Night casting her curse
Dreamer, beware as the Sunlight grows less
The Shadows and Darkness will soon will be worse
Whether it's Dark's own prince or a Maiden fair,
My friend, I have to warn thee, Dreamer Beware

The author's comments:
This is the first sonnet I've ever written; if you have any suggestions, feel free to comment
--thanks
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BriarRose PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 16 2010 at 6:12 pm
BriarRose PLATINUM, Seneca, Illinois
24 articles 7 photos 161 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't need a rose. I want a daisy you picked for my hair. I don't want some fancy box of chocolate. I want a pink frosting cookie you made just for me. Lets skip the upscale restaraunt and have a picnic in the park.

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thanks, Milo!
Milo! said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 6:42 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.